Bahá'i Holy Places: A Brief History of the Bahá'i Faith

joetacoma · 03-04-2010, 08:09 AM

This is a project I've been working on---I'm just about ready to print it as a small pamphlet to distribute at Firesides when I take up travelling teaching again (I present the 8x12 framed originals, but I thought it would be nice to be able to give seekers something to take with them). The Bahá'i Review Office at the National Center has reviewed it, but it seems as if every time I read it I find a typo or something wrong. I'd be interested in your feedback (it's kinda long, so if you just want to look at the pictures, that's cool.

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arthra · 03-04-2010, 08:35 AM

I like it...very informative! Some of the sentence structure might need some work but I see no typos.. Great Job!

BruceDLimber · 03-04-2010, 01:33 PM

Hi!

I tried to send you some editing comments for your pamphlet, but I'm not sure they came through OK!

If you DON'T get them, please tell me, and I'll try to email them directly (please send me your email address in a private message in this case).

Regards,

Bruce Limber

joetacoma · 03-05-2010, 04:01 AM

Just got 'em! Thanks, and no offense taken. I am the first to admit to clumsiness with regards to my writing (my drawing too, for that matter.)

03-04-2010, 08:09 AM	#1
joetacoma Junior Member Joined: Feb 2010 From: Pacific Northwest, U.S. Posts: 7	Bahá'i Holy Places: A Brief History of the Bahá'i Faith This is a project I've been working on---I'm just about ready to print it as a small pamphlet to distribute at Firesides when I take up travelling teaching again (I present the 8x12 framed originals, but I thought it would be nice to be able to give seekers something to take with them). The Bahá'i Review Office at the National Center has reviewed it, but it seems as if every time I read it I find a typo or something wrong. I'd be interested in your feedback (it's kinda long, so if you just want to look at the pictures, that's cool. lol) * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

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03-04-2010, 08:35 AM	#2
arthra Senior Member Joined: Jun 2006 From: California Posts: 3,064	I like it...very informative! Some of the sentence structure might need some work but I see no typos.. Great Job!

03-04-2010, 01:33 PM	#3
BruceDLimber Senior Member Joined: Mar 2010 From: Rockville, MD, USA Posts: 823	Hi! I tried to send you some editing comments for your pamphlet, but I'm not sure they came through OK! If you DON'T get them, please tell me, and I'll try to email them directly (please send me your email address in a private message in this case). Regards, Bruce Limber

03-05-2010, 04:01 AM	#4
joetacoma Junior Member Joined: Feb 2010 From: Pacific Northwest, U.S. Posts: 7	Just got 'em! Thanks, and no offense taken. I am the first to admit to clumsiness with regards to my writing (my drawing too, for that matter.)